Bonjour Je doit rendre un texte sur mes dernières vacances en anglais (au prétérit). Jai fait mon texte et j’aimerais qu’on me corrige svp. Merci d’avance :) I

Bonjour
Je doit rendre un texte sur mes dernières vacances en anglais (au prétérit).
Jai fait mon texte et j’aimerais qu’on me corrige svp.
Merci d’avance :)




I visited my family in Nice. Every day I went to the beach. Then I went to Italy to Venice by car. It was the first time I went there, it was very romantic. I did boat rides.
Over there I moved by bike. Before returning to France, we made a detour in Spain, in barcelona. It was too hot. We had shopped and visited monuments. And last night, we went to the statue of Christopher Columbus to see a fireworks