Bonjour S’il vous plaît est-ce que c’est juste ( pas de fautes, etc) et comment améliorer ma synthèse ?

bonjour

je dirais plutot a la place de

there he suddenly dropped his studies out with being friends with bad students while he was learning japanese.

je mettrais plutot

there he suddenly dropped his studies because he was being friendswith bad students while he was learning japanese.

cest tout ce que jai noter comme erreur , enfin de mon point de vue,

j'espere t'avoir aider

bon dimanche