Bonjour, Pourriez-vous corriger mon texte si vous trouvez des erreurs, j'aimerai éviter les répétitions mais j'ai du mal, merci à tous. (je décris un géant je r
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Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous corriger mon texte si vous trouvez des erreurs, j'aimerai éviter les répétitions mais j'ai du mal, merci à tous.
(je décris un géant je réponds à la question what does he look like ?
He is very tall, he has long straight hair and blond, he has a round face like the sun, he has small black eyes like a mole, he has a hooked nose like an eagle and he has hamster-sized ears. He is smiling and you can see his big teeth like dominoes. He has a piercing under her lips. He is as strong as an ox.
(ici je réponds à la question what is he like ?)
He is a kind and generous sort of person, he protects the animals of the forest, he gives them something to eat.He has softness of a lamb.
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1. Réponse caro67000
He is very tall and has long straight blond hair . He has round cheecks and looks like a mole with his small black eyes. He has a hooked nose like an eagle and he has hamster-sized ears. When he is smiling , one can see his big teeth like dominoes.
He has a piercing under his lips. He is also as strong as an ox.
He is a kind and generous sort of person. He protects animals of the forest, gives them to eat. He has soft as a lamb. ( or : He has the softness of a lamb)