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I went to Morocco as usual to visit my family. I went with my parents, my little brother and my little sister. I went there by plane. So I'm going to Taza which is a very pretty city. I usually spend a month or a month and a half in Morocco, but this time I only went for about three weeks. But we still celebrated the Feast of Sacrifice and it was a good time because it was the first time I was celebrating it in Morocco with all my family.
And we did not go to Agadir to see family. We stayed at a hotel. We tanned on the beach. When we left Agadir, we were able to visit a crocodile zoo just outside the city. I took beautiful pictures and videos, I even buy souvenirs. Then we went to Marrakech and were able to visit the city. Finally, we went back to Taza to see the family before returning to Belgium. It's the saddest vacation because I know I have to wait another year before heading back to Morocco.

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  • Bonsoir , je tai corrigé un peu ton texte

    I went to Morocco as usual to visit my family. I went with my parents, my little brother and my little sister there by plane. So I'm going to Taza which is a very pretty city. I usually spend a month or a month and a half in Morocco, but this time I only went there for about three weeks. But we still celebrated the Feast of Sacrifice and i passed a good time because it was the first time that I celebrated it in Morocco with all my family.

    But we did not go to Agadir to see my family. We stayed at a hotel. We tanned on the beach. When we left Agadir, we were able to visit a crocodile zoo just outside the city. I took beautiful pictures and videos, I even buyed souvenirs. Then we went to Marrakech and were able to visit the city. Finally, we came back to Taza to see the family before returning to Belgium. It's the saddest vacation because I know that I have to wait another year before heading back to Morocco.


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