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Bonjour j'ai fait un texte pouvvez vous me corriger et me dire si il comprehensible et me dire si sa se voit que j'ai utuliser google traduction parfois svp The doll with evil nails :On October 31st, a little girl,Kim and her parents went to a toy store. She lived in a big house . The girl fell fell in love at first sight for a doll dressed all in white with long red nails. She begged her parents to buy it for her and they did. At the cash register, the lady tells –At the night , put the doll in a closet . but they forgot ... and the next morning, when she woke up, the little girl discovered her father in tears. He showed her mother dead and the little girl saw one of her doll's nails near her body ... the doll had only 9 nails. She did not try to understand. But the next morning his father announced the death of his aunt ..... and her doll had only eight nails. She began to be suspicious. Then came the death of his uncle - then more than seven nails and the death of her grandfather - and this continued happening until there were only three nails left (left of her family remained only her cousin, his father and her) then she threatened to throw her doll to the bottom of the sea. The doll replied in a dismal voice "If you do that, you will see what you will see! " The girl, too frightened, did nothing else. But two days later, her father and cousin died. With no hesitation at the moment she threw the doll with all her strength. The following night the doll come back and killed the girl, and the doll swore that all the next little girls who will live in this pavilion will have a curse.. A few years later, a family wanted to settle in the house. In this family there was also a little girl ...merci