You live in a society where video games are illegal Write a paragraph about it. Explain why they were forbidden.Use the present simple and the past simple

Bonsoir, je vais détailler les 3 arguments qui me permettent d'expliquer pourquoi les jeux vidéos sont interdits dans cette societé parallèle :

1ère raison : Ils incitent à la violence.

2ème raison : Ils rendent addictes.

3ème raison : Ils réduisent les capacités cérébrales d'un individu.

Voici le texte : " To begin, video games are illegal because they incite violence and aggressiveness. People who play video games dont see the difference between the virtual and the reality. So, they commit crimes and illegal acts. To protect people and keep the security, the state decided to forbid video games.

Furthermore, people who play video games repeatedly become quickly addict and stop every communication with the outside world. It makes their life in danger because they can't stop playing. That's a reason why video games are considered as dangereous.

Finally, I think that video games regress mental capacity of people who play them. It's very bad for the health of humans. "

Voilà, tu peux dévellopper les arguments si tu ne trouves pas ça assez long !