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Bonjour, est-ce que quelqu'un de très bons en anglais peux me corriger mon texte sans changer le sens de la phrase merci. c'est le document ci-joint
Bonjour, est-ce que quelqu'un de très bons en anglais peux me corriger mon texte sans changer le sens de la phrase merci. c'est le document ci-joint

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  • Je ne sais pas si je suis très bon mais je peux t'aider :

    I am Charles, I'm 26 years old, I'm French. I would like to become a teacher or sport coach in Brazil. This is my ambition. I worked in universities (Paris and Lille) but never in Brazil. I think it is a good experience for my professionnal life.

    I'm a young coach, however I have a big experience. I've travelled a lot in England and in Germany but I don't know south American life. If I'm chosen, I will help young people to become responsible adult. I am hard-working, sympathetic, ambitious and determined to help disadvantaged children in Sao Paulo. I'm so excited and enthusiastic. I am very willing. I hope that young people will become professional soccer players and finance many training center. I have a real ambition for them. I think that I am the perfect candidate.

    I have a good vocational training. I speak French, English and a little of Portuguese but I wish to learn this language. The program of gap year is new for me but I'm not worried.

    Thank you for your attention. Contact me by e-mail :