Bonjour, j'aimerais bien que vous regardez mon texte afin de voir si il y a d'éventuels fautes. Mercii ! La consigne est la suivante : You are a member of the W
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Bonjour, j'aimerais bien que vous regardez mon texte afin de voir si il y a d'éventuels fautes.
Mercii !
La consigne est la suivante : You are a member of the Wilson Family. You answer an email from a person who wants to rent the house. Be creative !
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Hello Mr Lamar
Further to your email, I come back to you to answer most of your questions.
The house is situated just next to a supermarket, there is approximately 2 km are 2 minutes in cars and approximately 7 minutes on foot. The beach is in 5 minutes of the house on foot.
About the inside, the house contains four well rooms with each a bathroom. The kitchen is equipped with every types of material need, no need to take plates, flatware or still glasses.
Concerning electronics, microwave, oven or still Thermomix is at your disposal.
About the outside, the swimming pool is 8 meters long and 4 meters wide. Accessories are included to you as bath towels, soccer balls for your children.
The outside arrangement contains, an outside kitchen, a petanque field, a table-tennis table, a fitness gym outside and finally an outside lounge.
If you have questions on the type of functioning of electronic devices for the outer shutters or still the television, do not hesitate.
The house has well a Wi-Fi. The code will be indicated to you from then on of your arrival.
Cordially,
Mr Wilson.
Mercii !
La consigne est la suivante : You are a member of the Wilson Family. You answer an email from a person who wants to rent the house. Be creative !
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Hello Mr Lamar
Further to your email, I come back to you to answer most of your questions.
The house is situated just next to a supermarket, there is approximately 2 km are 2 minutes in cars and approximately 7 minutes on foot. The beach is in 5 minutes of the house on foot.
About the inside, the house contains four well rooms with each a bathroom. The kitchen is equipped with every types of material need, no need to take plates, flatware or still glasses.
Concerning electronics, microwave, oven or still Thermomix is at your disposal.
About the outside, the swimming pool is 8 meters long and 4 meters wide. Accessories are included to you as bath towels, soccer balls for your children.
The outside arrangement contains, an outside kitchen, a petanque field, a table-tennis table, a fitness gym outside and finally an outside lounge.
If you have questions on the type of functioning of electronic devices for the outer shutters or still the television, do not hesitate.
The house has well a Wi-Fi. The code will be indicated to you from then on of your arrival.
Cordially,
Mr Wilson.
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1. Réponse Anonyme
Bonjour, dans ton texte il n'y a pas de fautes et il est très bien écrit. Mais il serait préférable d'écrire les nombres en lettres car quand je fait ça les profs d'anglais le font toujours la remarque donc je pense qu'il serait préférable pour toi aussi.